Peer Assessment Feedback

Yesterday I attended the peer assessment for this module and it was really useful to see how everyone else is tackling this brief and to get much needed feedback on what I have done so far. I feel like I am on track with everyone else now even though I thought I didn't know exactly how to take my brief to the next level. However, after the feedback and viewing of other work I was much more comfortable with where I am going with my work.

Here are scans of the feedback I got: